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Posted: Tue May 10, 2011 5:37 pm
by JH
Welcome back. Nice episodes.
94784: I had wondered whether Siva's magic would extend only to giving herself knowledge of the future language, but it certainly makes things a lot easier for future writing that Fred can understand it too.
94459: "They ran as fast as they could..." Shouldn't that be "rode"? They are on horseback. [94177 option 1]
Posted: Tue May 10, 2011 5:40 pm
by lordreaibn
JH wrote:Welcome back. Nice episodes.
94784: I had wondered whether Siva's magic would extend only to giving herself knowledge of the future language, but it certainly makes things a lot easier for future writing that Fred can understand it too.
94459: "They ran as fast as they could..." Shouldn't that be "rode"? They are on horseback. [94177 option 1]
D'oh! I will correct 94459. I think 94784 works as is.
And thanks!
Posted: Wed May 11, 2011 7:19 pm
by lordreaibn
Updates for 5/11/11
http://www.sir-toby.com/extend-a-story/ ... sode=94865
Carl is interrupted (thanks, JH!)
Posted: Thu May 12, 2011 1:55 pm
by lordreaibn
Posted: Thu May 12, 2011 6:50 pm
by JH
Nice writing. You haven't forgotten about our thread that involves Belinda, I hope? I think it's your turn on that one.
Posted: Thu May 12, 2011 6:51 pm
by lordreaibn
JH wrote:Nice writing. You haven't forgotten about our thread that involves Belinda, I hope? I think it's your turn on that one.
Nope! Those are up next.
Edit: Also, great writing on your eps as well, my friend.
Posted: Thu May 12, 2011 7:21 pm
by JH
Thanks.
I greatly like what you've written as well, including your latest. I'd hoped to have several hours this evening to spend writing episodes, but unfortunately I've just wasted about 90 minutes trying to sort out a problem with my phone company billing, so I may only manage to post one or two episodes.
"Her uniform is dingy as well, as she has been rounding up Allarians all day..."
Should that say "all night"? It's breakfast time in Caemlyn, and I wouldn't think that the current time would be all that different in Aqualaria.
Posted: Thu May 12, 2011 7:36 pm
by lordreaibn
JH wrote:Should that say "all night"? It's breakfast time in Caemlyn, and I wouldn't think that the current time would be all that different in Aqualaria.
Yes, indeed! I will correct that. Also, I hate when life intrudes on episode writing! How annoying.
Posted: Thu May 12, 2011 8:07 pm
by JH
Life is going to intrude again on episode writing in the near future, but in a good way this time. I'll say more about it on the Extend-A-Story forum.
Posted: Fri May 13, 2011 8:07 pm
by lordreaibn
Updates for 5/13/2011
http://www.sir-toby.com/extend-a-story/ ... sode=94917
Sylvia smells a rat! (thanks, JH!)
Posted: Fri May 13, 2011 8:49 pm
by JH
Nice episode.
Incidentally, I'm still mulling over what the full impact may be of Siva being non-human, a bombshell that you dropped in a few episodes back.
I suppose one possible earlier pointer to that was her refusal of food from Fred's pack when they were finding their way out. Maybe she needs less (or even no?) food or eats very different things from humans.
Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 7:02 pm
by Hi! My name is Ib!
You guys are busy little bees, aren't you?
Makes me ashamed. Don't look at me. Look away! I'm hideous!!!
Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 7:38 pm
by JH
But you're beautiful on the inside.
Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 7:48 pm
by Hi! My name is Ib!
I beg the differ. I'm a bad seed through and through.
Well, I had some finished episodes on my external hard drive and now my computer isn't reading the hard drive. I've tried hooking it up to every USB port I have and bla bla bla....
SOOOO annoying.
Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 8:04 pm
by JH
That really is annoying. Have you tried rebooting your PC? I've found that when my own external hard drive hasn't been found that sometimes works.