Forgive me father

Susan trudges along the road towards the small parish church where she meets up with Father Oliver. The priest is a tall, slender man in his late fifties whose head is topped with a cascade of white hair.

Father Oliver greets Susan with a bright smile and "Hello my dear, and white might I do for a lovely young lady like you?"

Our heroine felt her face turn bright red and she became rather tongue tied in the face of the priests smooth greeting. She was horrified to realise that she even felt a degree of attraction to the older man and knew she needed to be a nun as quickly as possible.

"Father, I want to become a nun" she mumbled quickly.

"Now why would such a pretty woman be wanting to become a nun?" he asked gently "I hope you are not trying to hide from the world"

Susan knew that was precisely what she was intending to do, but she denied it vehemently claiming that it was her calling.

1. The priest believed her and made the arrangements
2. Susan admitted that she was trying to get away from the world
3. She then told Father Oliver that she had been a man before

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