No, Susan, no

Susan is like a woman possessed as she prepares to entertain Alfred. She works away to make the best meal that she knows how to and is also very meticulous in laying the most fantastic table and surroundings that she can.

With everything in hand Susan finally makes herself look beautiful, not the hardest of tasks, and slips into her fanciest dress. Her timing is impeccable and just then Alfred arrives.

The handsome young man hands Susan a large bouquet of flowers and gives her a small peck on the cheek, which makes her blush. He is hugely complimentary about her looks, which is rather confusing for our former knight, but greatly appreciated by her feminine side.

The whole evening is a huge success and Susan is really excited about how it has gone, but, just as she seems likely to be rewarded by being held in Alfred's muscular arms, there she hears a deafening shriek of "No, Susan, NO!" within her mind from the desperately confused remnants of Fred still contained there.

She pulls away from Alfred and rushes to her room sobbing.

A concerned Alfred follows her and says . . .

1. "What's wrong darling?"
2. "You can't lead a man on like that"
3. "How can I help you my love?"

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