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The Never Ending Quest - Episode 14601

"It will take more than that to get me to do your bidding, dragon!" she sneered.

"Very well, then. A further demonstration of my power you shall have." Suddenly, Fred found a helmet in her hands. It matched the armor she now wore, and had what looked like wings on the side.

"Put it on!" the voice commanded.

"I think not, you miserable -"

"PUT IT ON!"

Involuntarily, Fred's hands reached up and placed the helmet on her head. As she did, she began to change again.

Her eyes quickly turned blood red. Her face elongated until it was literally a snout. Her body retained its basic shape, but her skin rapdily grew rougher until it was literally covered with multi-colored scales. Her fingers grew and curved until they were tipped with wicked lookign claws, and her feet also expanded similarly. Her armor changed to accommodate the three-foot tail that sprouted from her back. The final change lifted her off the ground as a pair of leathery wings sprang from her back.

Fred didn't appear alarmed by these new changes. In fact, all she did was hover placidly, her new forked tongue darting in and out of her snout.

"Now, servant," the dragon's voice commanded, "Tell me who you are."

"SSSSSSSSSSSSTTTTHHHHHHHH!!!!" came the reply. "I am Fffffrozh, and I am the Captain of the Deffffendersssss of the Holy Dragon!"

"And do you know me?"

"Yesssss! You are the Holy and Wissssse Dragon, oh massssster! You havvvve but to speak, and I willlllll obey!"

"And will you do whatever I ask?"

Frozh flew strait up to the top of the cavern. "Annnything, glorrrrious one! If need be, my llllllife shhhhhhall be forfffffiet at your ssssslightest whim! Mmmmy obedienccccce is unquessssstioned and totalllll, oh masssssster!" And to punctuate her zeal, Frozh opened her mouth and speweed forth a stream of fire that illuminated the dank cavern, before descending back to the floor.

  1. "Excellent!" the dragon replied. "Now, come to my cavern immediately!"
  2. The dragon told Frozh to stay where she was and guard this cavern.
  3. The dragon told Frozh to seek out an intruding necromancer and dispatch him,
  4. Frozh was quickly joined by the rest of her troops - all of them, like her, dragon-women.
  5. The helmet then flew off, and Frozh reverted to Lady Fred.
  6. "Excellent!" the dragon replied. "Now, come to my cavern immediately!" (Alternate version)

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