Discussion about The Black Void.
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Lots42
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by Lots42 »
Sarah and Amergin's plots tend to ignore the BITE on her cheek from a stranger's child. Big plot hole. But good stories otherwise.
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by JH »
The bite mark, though annoying for her, didn't seem important enough to make a big thing of. I assume that it's gradually healing over time.
I agree that it's a fun thread.
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by Lots42 »
Fair point, but even the tiniest of scratches from a little kid should be cleaned out and whatnot.
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