The finale of the Rapid Raft Ride

The Black Void - Episode 766

Using your sticks, you steer right over the waterfall. And you find yourself soaring in the air right over the waterfall.

Yes, you are flying in the air. No, you do not have wings, just your feet in the two wooden shoes and your hands gripping tightly onto the sticks.

Come to think of it, a parachute would be very handy right now. But you didn't bring any parachute, did you? A better option is tagging along with Mommy into a clothing store and being forced to try on a rather ugly red dress or a hideous blue dress and watching Mommy take forever to decide which dress is better to wear at Aunt Marge's and Uncle Dudley's 50th wedding bash.

Before you know it you have already landed on the water below and slow down to a comfortable speed. You hear an applause as you come to a complete stop. A tanned man that is seated behind a long table raise a large plastic sign in the air. It says "10". The woman wearing a tanktop raises a plastic sign in the air. It says "9 1/2" The man next to her raises a plastic sign. It reads "6". He then blushes and flips the sign upside down so it reads "9".

"Congratulations young lady, says a man holding a microphone as you remove your feet from the wooden shoes. "You have earned six points for doing this ride. What did you think of the ride?" He moves the microphone towards you.

  1. "I want my pony tail back!"
  2. "Where's Mommy? She is missing!"
  3. "That ride was really cool. Which one do you recommend I try next?"

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6/14/2005 1:09:25 PM

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