The Big Date

The Never Ending Quest - Episode 28604

Fred spent almost all day rehearsing lines, showering and reshowering. He even had his 1995 Toyota Camry tuned up just in case something should go wrong. His polo shirt and dockers were brand new, with the starchy smell to go with them. About an hour before he was to pick her up, he left his house and drove the few miles to her house. He drove by her house to make certain this was the right address and then parked a little ways away in a parking lot and waited until just the right moment to drive up to her house.

Karen was important and lived in a big house. This was not her first date. She didn't know why, but Fred had that special air that other guys lacked. He was so sincere and listened to everything she said. Her family and girlfriends did not approve, but she was strangely happy as she prepared for the date. At precisely one minute before six-thirty, the door bell rang. Fred was right on time.

Karen came to the door with a black skirt, medium blue shirt and matching black sweater. Nothing special, but Fred stumbled out a first line.

  1. "Wow, you look great!"
  2. Staring at chest--"That's a beautiful pendant you have."
  3. "How do you like your eggs: poached, scrambled, or fertilized?"
  4. "Hi! So, you ready?"

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