190:4: INVALID, -0.5 (was Re: 190:1)

From: Richard S. Holmes (rsholmes_at_MailBox.Syr.Edu)
Date: Mon Aug 05 2002 - 14:19:11 PDT


"Alan Riddell" <peekee_at_blueyonder.co.uk> writes:

> <P>
> TIRED OF SITTING IN FROUNT OF YOUR COMPUTER???
> <BR><BR>
> Goto the kitchen get yourself a drink then drink it slowly and think about
> where you live. Think about how there is the street... You know the one just
> down the road abit, the one that you have never been down despite having
> gone past it day after day...  Do this go see what is down there it might be
> interesting and if it is not well then you will know not to go down there
> again.  What do you have to loose? Nothing plus you get a little bit of
> execise and a break from staring at your computer screen.  After all this
> miniture travel package is brought to you for FREE, that is right it costs
> NOTHING AT ALL...  We tell you this incredible price because here at the
> Fantasy Recreation Consulting website we inform all our potential customers
> of the cost of the travel packages we offer [at least in the same html
> paragraph as the deal is mentioned in] no matter what the price.
> <p>
>
> --
> Rule Date: 2002-08-05 19:17:46 GMT
>

VALIDITY:  No, we don't.  In 190:3 we mentioned a travel package to
Shangri-La but we didn't state its cost.

STYLE: I'm not sure if the radical differences in HTML and English
style between this rule and the others is unstylish or not.  It would,
perhaps, be characteristic of a site with multiple authors, but thus
far Fantasy Recreation Consulting has come across as the sort of Mom
and Pop outfit that'd have a web site done by either Mom or Pop, but
not both.

And presumably this is a continuation of one of the previously
mentioned web pages, but stylistically it belongs on its own web
page.

A highly subjective -0.5.

--
- Rich Holmes
  Syracuse, NY

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Rule Date: 2002-08-05 21:19:25 GMT


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