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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 10:19 pm
by El' MooCow
I just want a minor edit here so the gag I was trying to do makes more sense (Astra says something, but is interrupted by Fred who interprets it as something else.)

Please change the line:
"Actually I'm a warri-" The maiden began, only to have Fred interrupt.
To:
"Actually I'm a war-" The maiden began, only to have Fred interrupt.

and also:
"I suppose it is my duty to protect you. Alright, you can come!" Fred smiled and nodded.
To:
"You're a whore? Anyway, it is my duty as a knight to protect innocent civilians. Alright, you can come!" Fred smiled and nodded.

Thanks JH/Toby.

Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2006 10:10 am
by JH
I'm happy to do that for you.

Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 5:35 am
by El' MooCow
Thank you.

Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 4:12 am
by Noise Tank
You've inspired me to create more puns in my stories.

Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 5:32 am
by El' MooCow
Thanks Noise Tank, my life is complete now. :D