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El' MooCow
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Post by El' MooCow »

I just want a minor edit here so the gag I was trying to do makes more sense (Astra says something, but is interrupted by Fred who interprets it as something else.)

Please change the line:
"Actually I'm a warri-" The maiden began, only to have Fred interrupt.
To:
"Actually I'm a war-" The maiden began, only to have Fred interrupt.

and also:
"I suppose it is my duty to protect you. Alright, you can come!" Fred smiled and nodded.
To:
"You're a whore? Anyway, it is my duty as a knight to protect innocent civilians. Alright, you can come!" Fred smiled and nodded.

Thanks JH/Toby.
Please, by all means, extend any of my episodes. It's good to know someone out there is actually reading the crap I'm writing.
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Post by JH »

I'm happy to do that for you.
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Post by El' MooCow »

Thank you.
Please, by all means, extend any of my episodes. It's good to know someone out there is actually reading the crap I'm writing.
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Post by Noise Tank »

You've inspired me to create more puns in my stories.
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Post by El' MooCow »

Thanks Noise Tank, my life is complete now. :D
Please, by all means, extend any of my episodes. It's good to know someone out there is actually reading the crap I'm writing.
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