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Welcome back. Nice episodes.
94784: I had wondered whether Siva's magic would extend only to giving herself knowledge of the future language, but it certainly makes things a lot easier for future writing that Fred can understand it too.
94459: "They ran as fast as they could..." Shouldn't that be "rode"? They are on horseback. [94177 option 1]
94784: I had wondered whether Siva's magic would extend only to giving herself knowledge of the future language, but it certainly makes things a lot easier for future writing that Fred can understand it too.
94459: "They ran as fast as they could..." Shouldn't that be "rode"? They are on horseback. [94177 option 1]
JH
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D'oh! I will correct 94459. I think 94784 works as is.JH wrote:Welcome back. Nice episodes.
94784: I had wondered whether Siva's magic would extend only to giving herself knowledge of the future language, but it certainly makes things a lot easier for future writing that Fred can understand it too.
94459: "They ran as fast as they could..." Shouldn't that be "rode"? They are on horseback. [94177 option 1]
And thanks!
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Updates for 5/11/11
http://www.sir-toby.com/extend-a-story/ ... sode=94865
Carl is interrupted (thanks, JH!)
http://www.sir-toby.com/extend-a-story/ ... sode=94865
Carl is interrupted (thanks, JH!)
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Updates for 5/12/11
http://www.sir-toby.com/extend-a-story/ ... sode=94874
More evil laughter. (thanks, JH!)
http://www.sir-toby.com/extend-a-story/ ... sode=94862
Three tattoos. (thanks, JH!)
http://www.sir-toby.com/extend-a-story/ ... sode=94521
Those slippery teenagers! (thanks, JH!)
http://www.sir-toby.com/extend-a-story/ ... sode=94628
Astra insists she didn't lead Lord James on (thanks, JH!)
http://www.sir-toby.com/extend-a-story/ ... sode=94749
Astra is back in her room. (thanks, JH!)
http://www.sir-toby.com/extend-a-story/ ... sode=94907
Belboz will, for a price. (thanks, JH!)
http://www.sir-toby.com/extend-a-story/ ... sode=94874
More evil laughter. (thanks, JH!)
http://www.sir-toby.com/extend-a-story/ ... sode=94862
Three tattoos. (thanks, JH!)
http://www.sir-toby.com/extend-a-story/ ... sode=94521
Those slippery teenagers! (thanks, JH!)
http://www.sir-toby.com/extend-a-story/ ... sode=94628
Astra insists she didn't lead Lord James on (thanks, JH!)
http://www.sir-toby.com/extend-a-story/ ... sode=94749
Astra is back in her room. (thanks, JH!)
http://www.sir-toby.com/extend-a-story/ ... sode=94907
Belboz will, for a price. (thanks, JH!)
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Thanks. I greatly like what you've written as well, including your latest. I'd hoped to have several hours this evening to spend writing episodes, but unfortunately I've just wasted about 90 minutes trying to sort out a problem with my phone company billing, so I may only manage to post one or two episodes.
"Her uniform is dingy as well, as she has been rounding up Allarians all day..."
Should that say "all night"? It's breakfast time in Caemlyn, and I wouldn't think that the current time would be all that different in Aqualaria.
"Her uniform is dingy as well, as she has been rounding up Allarians all day..."
Should that say "all night"? It's breakfast time in Caemlyn, and I wouldn't think that the current time would be all that different in Aqualaria.
JH
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Updates for 5/13/2011
http://www.sir-toby.com/extend-a-story/ ... sode=94917
Sylvia smells a rat! (thanks, JH!)
http://www.sir-toby.com/extend-a-story/ ... sode=94917
Sylvia smells a rat! (thanks, JH!)
Nice episode.
Incidentally, I'm still mulling over what the full impact may be of Siva being non-human, a bombshell that you dropped in a few episodes back. I suppose one possible earlier pointer to that was her refusal of food from Fred's pack when they were finding their way out. Maybe she needs less (or even no?) food or eats very different things from humans.
Incidentally, I'm still mulling over what the full impact may be of Siva being non-human, a bombshell that you dropped in a few episodes back. I suppose one possible earlier pointer to that was her refusal of food from Fred's pack when they were finding their way out. Maybe she needs less (or even no?) food or eats very different things from humans.
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