27790 and 27889
Posted: Mon May 19, 2003 1:59 am
MSG, I haven't really been keeping up with Doctor Who: Eternal Champion all that well, largely due to the fact that I know next to nothing about Farscape, but these were well-thought-out and interesting episodes. You did a good job of using our discussions in a way that made sense within the episodes.
There did seem to be a few editing slips, though. I think by "Mengula" you meant "Mengele." (27790) In 27889, the Brigadier presumably means "I like it when authors tried to explain character motives through theirunderstanding of human (or non-human) nature rather than arbitrary laws of behavior" rather than "I liked when authors tried to explain character motives through my understanding of human (or non-human) nature rather than arbitrary laws of behavior." It should be "On the other hand" rather than "In the other hand," although this was probably my error. And the last paragraph taken from our discussion clearly doesn't belong in this context. But these are all minor things, on the whole this is a fine episode.
By the way, now we're crossing over with the Matrix? Seems like that thread has crossed over with just about everything except "X-Men" now. :) Sometimes, though, I really wish you wouldn't pack all these crossovers into one plotline--it's a bit much, to be honest. And I have to say that it's a bit confusing to have discussions of matrixes in an episode that's a crossover with The Matris.
There did seem to be a few editing slips, though. I think by "Mengula" you meant "Mengele." (27790) In 27889, the Brigadier presumably means "I like it when authors tried to explain character motives through theirunderstanding of human (or non-human) nature rather than arbitrary laws of behavior" rather than "I liked when authors tried to explain character motives through my understanding of human (or non-human) nature rather than arbitrary laws of behavior." It should be "On the other hand" rather than "In the other hand," although this was probably my error. And the last paragraph taken from our discussion clearly doesn't belong in this context. But these are all minor things, on the whole this is a fine episode.
By the way, now we're crossing over with the Matrix? Seems like that thread has crossed over with just about everything except "X-Men" now. :) Sometimes, though, I really wish you wouldn't pack all these crossovers into one plotline--it's a bit much, to be honest. And I have to say that it's a bit confusing to have discussions of matrixes in an episode that's a crossover with The Matris.