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JH
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by JH Wed Jul 02, 2003 6:36 pm
In 14325 you say: "There's someone in the cave with him! Not the hag, she's still tied up in the corner." But in 121 she turned into dust, and after that Fred ate the dust. So what's going on?
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by Lots42 Thu Jul 03, 2003 10:25 pm
I blame bad writing.
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by JH Fri Jul 04, 2003 8:10 pm
If you'd like to change it. then feel free to email me with your revisions and I'll see to it.
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by Lots42 Mon Jul 07, 2003 3:32 pm
I can't quite figure out a logical way to solve this discrepency. Feel free to change it to whatever you want.
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by JH Mon Jul 07, 2003 6:20 pm
Thanks. I'll see if I can think of anything.
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by JH Sat Jul 12, 2003 7:54 pm
I've now seen to it. All I needed to do was to delete one sentence and slightly modify the last option.
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