A Forsaken World

The Black Void - Episode 3647

SNAP

The sound of splitting wood fills the air as the doorknob is ripped from it’s roots.

“No” Jacques whispers, just like he did easily. The doorknob in his left hand, he uses his right to feel the butt of the doorknob; sharp wood slices surround the radius. His hand then moves into the socket of where the doorknob once rested; inside he feel the cold metal of the other doorknob’s half. Jacques tries to twist it, hoping that by some miracle of God it will open the door.

Bing! Bing, bing! Bingbingbingbingbing.

The other half of the doorknob falls out of it’s socket and hits the hard kitchen floor.

“No. God no, God no, God, please, no!” Jacques shoves his body into the door, meeting more resistance. Furiously, he pounds his fist into it, making a small hole. Splinters flying past his face. He continues this until he makes a hole, about the size of a softball. He then places his hands into where he made a small hole and starts tearing the layer of the door blocking him. The door in one of those old kinds, that lack filling; there were just two thin layers of wood standing at both ends, that was all. Just two thin layers and nothing more.

But he quickly finds out that something has been added to it. Set in between the two layers of the door is a heavy metal wall.

The imaginary pipe in Jacques’s stomach gives another hard jerk forward. It shoves through the rest of his stomach until it taps the front of his spine through several layers of skin. The pipe starts growing hotter, until it feels like it’s burning red. Despite, Jacques body is cold, cold like a boy who just stepped out of the icy water on a winter day. Although all Jacque can see is darkness, it seems to shaking and spinning, rocking Jacques head back and forth. He feels as though the slightest move of his head will cause him to vomit.

But he doesn’t. Instead, he moves his hands of feels the heavy metal wall; icy cold. He knocks on it; heavy and thick.

At this point, he does nothing; He makes no curse, no effort to tear down the door, asks no favor to God. He just sits down on the top steps and cries heavy sobs. He cries out of fear, he cries out of anger, he cries out of despair. But most of all, he cries for his family. For his sons and wife. Oh, how he missed them.

Oh God, please, help me, please, save me from this hellhole! he screamed in his thoughts. Jacques then remembered something his priest told him. “Hell is complete seperation from God.” So if this is a hellhole, God won’t be able to hear him anyways.

Jacques continued crying for a long time.

  1. After crying for a long time, Jacque fdecides to make his way down the stairs.

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