Spotted

The Never Ending Quest - Episode 88198

Astra thought that she had a good chance of crossing the bridge unnoticed. The men were fishing from the downstream side of the bridge, so had their backs to her, and they seemed very intent on their lines. The position of the sun was such that her shadow as she crossed would not fall within their field of view to alert them. And if she put her feet down very slowly as she walked, she thought that she could avoid making any noise.

In spite of her careful reasoning, her conclusion proved to be wrong. She had no sooner stepped onto the bridge in fact, than the young man either detected motion in the corner of his eye or became aware of her through some sixth sense. Or perhaps he saw her reflection in the water. At any event, he turned his head and looked up.

A look of astonishment crossed his face and he froze for a moment. Then he nudged the older man, who in turn looked up and saw her.

Mute, and unable on the spur of the moment to think of an appropriate vision to project, Astra smiled in an attempt to show that she meant them no harm.

  1. The men flee, running off the bridge at the end away from Astra, abandoning their fishing rods in the process.
  2. "H-hello," the older man says hesitantly.
  3. "She rather reminds me of the missing princess," the younger whispers to the older. "You know, the one pictured on that poster that they sent out to all the villages asking if anyone had seen her."
  4. One of the men, perhaps mistaking Astra's smile for a snarl, swings at her with his fishing rod. He breaks his rod on her without harming her in the slightest.

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