Goodbye femininity - almost!

Susan felt pangs of sadness as she realised that this was the end of a much simpler and safer life, but at the same time she knew that, as Fred, there would be far more important things to accomplish for the greater good.

The potion Charlie had created wasn't quite as gentle as the one that had brought a veil of femininity down over the former knight. Susan felt great discomfort, and at times agonising pain, as her lovely body expanded and contracted in many places in a relatively short space of time. The fast bulking out body fell to the floor and writhed as gentleness was replaced by muscular strength.

It was now that Fred realised that one defining change had not happened. While his body was now back to its muscular self between his legs was the form that had always defined the opposite sex to him. Charlie looked utterly deflated as his magic had failed in such a fundamental way.

1. Fred angrily asks Charlie what is going on
2. Fred realises that this is minor in the face of all that has gone before

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