Goodbye femininity

Susan felt pangs of sadness as she realised that this was the end of a much simpler and safer life, but at the same time she knew that, as Fred, there would be far more important things to accomplish for the greater good.

The potion Charlie had created wasn't quite as gentle as the one that had brought a veil of femininity down over the former knight. Susan felt great discomfort, and at times agonising pain, as her lovely body expanded and contracted in many places in a relatively short space of time. The fast bulking out body fell to the floor and writhed as gentleness was replaced by muscular strength.

As the pain subsided the restored Fred stood again and thanked his former tormentor for bringing back his real form.

1. Fred takes his leave and resumes his quest
2. Fred returns to his quest and Charlie accompanies him as his squire
3. Charlie needs to be punished

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