195:1, VALID +1.5

From: Glenn & Chrystal Overby (guardcaptain_at_earthlink.net)
Date: Tue Oct 22 2002 - 23:23:15 PDT

All future rules must retroactively explain a step in the process of
reviving a dead wizard.

Lightning strikes the rod again. The jolt of electricity runs down a cable
from the rod to the table.  Lying on the table is a body. Not any body, but
a wizards body. This time it will work. Everything had been prepared
properly, and the few mistakes had been corrected. It must work! As the body
trembles with the awesome energies coursing through it, the Mad Judge
thought back on all that occured prior to this day.


Validity:  VALID.  No problems.  There rarely are on the first rule of a round.

Style:  A good start to the round.  I like the way my co-Wizard integrated two
of the suggested themes into the opening rule.  We have scope for development.
Let's say halfway between neutral (0) and perfect (3), hence +1.5.

Judge Glenn

Rule Date: 2002-10-23 06:23:17 GMT

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